A little History-------EDA UZUN

The Turkish people who is very tenacious, when the Greeks detained all the things in 

the west of Turkey ; they didnt abstain from the enemy and tried to save untenable

Anatolia and theirs tenure's. They attained their freedom with helps from one person who called Atatürk and also they retained Atatürk and maintained to retain Atatürk for future to their family tree's so children can obtain informations about Atatürk easily.

using new vocab. E.Gökhan Şahin

On the newspaper I read ,there was a news about homicide. A professor, who got tenured after long years of research about sustainable use of world resources was killed by his tenant. He was really well-known and kind person, abstained from hostile actions towards people. Also, he is an important lost for us because he was hopeful to obtain amazing results from his new project. If he had not been killed, he would have attained a perfect result. The tenure was detained for questioning in the prison. Because he had always maintained his innocence.

Günsu Öngün

Last year when I started to university,I have to go another city for university.This is a good thing for my education and experience of my life .However it also has several problems with in.
First of all, place where I can stay is the main problem.In dormitory or in a flat? In very ancient time ,my family abstain to hire a flat. After that I tenacious about hire a flat. I maintain my insistence to hire a flat. My mothher find a tenure real-estate agent to look for a flat. We can look for a flat for 3 days. End of these 3 days I am tenant of a flat.

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In my opinion people should develop themselves.They should not maintain because it is a obligation to have tenure of high position in their job.Also they should be tenacious if they attain achievement.You shoul not think about not to work because it is a untenable idea.May be you can obtain access.If you do that it means you have a sustainable success.You must retain in mind.You can detain yourself in an office.Finally if you develop yourself very well in the and may be you can be your own tenant in your office.

RAUF OZDEN

The professor is resarching for sustinable environment. He is a tenured professor because he has been searching for 20 years. After his research, he attained his goal and developed new project. I think this professor will retain his position for a long time in the future. Although he is a succusful scientist he doesnt have a house so he is a tenant.

Video Games

VIDEO GAMES

According to the scientists in U.S. regular video gamers have much better visual skills than most of the population, because video games improves our visual and attentional skills with the trainings that we do when we are playing.

I think playing video games is beneficial for visual skills because video game playing pushes the limits of three different aspects of visual attention.

Mehmet Ali İlhan

RAUF OZDEN

People has been spending lots of time on the online game. According to this article most of players are tenagers. The main point is they dont have any responsibilities so young people play computer games. To illustrate, person who has children cant play games because he/she has TO look after their babies.

In my opinion, playing video games is a big problem for children. Plenty of children play games 2-3 hours a day instead of studying lesson so it influence their success. Other issue is some video games contain vilonce so it leads to aggressive behaviours. Parents must control their children if they dont want children to be affected badly.

New Camp

Recently, a new camp in North Germany is trying to make children, who are computer addicts, more social. Children refrain from computers by doing sports, exercising and eating healthy foods. Children who attend the camp feel much happier in the end.
I think it’s very fruitful. In this way children, who are computer addicts, can leave their addictions while they are having fun and keeping their body fit.

GOOD JOB!

FERDINAND PORSCHE AND THE BUG

Every article about Volkswagen’s story starts with the same sentence: Volkswagen’s story is Ferdinand Porsche’s story. Prof. Dr. Ferdinand Porsche was an Austrian automotive engineer. He designed some cars for Mercedes-Benz, Daimler, Auto Union and Tatra. He also designed some military vehicles like advance German tank Tiger1 but he is best known for creating the Volkswagen Bug (beetle). In 1933 Adolf Hitler started an automotive venture. Hitler asked Ferdinand Porsche to design a car which is easy to reach and fulfill the compelling needs. Porsche agreed to create the Volkswagen (Means “people’s car “in German) for Hitler and a handful of engineers came together. They created the first prototype: Type32. Porsche and his team worked in conjunction with Nazi soldiers. Soldiers tested the Type32 under hard conditions and very few of them could survive. Hitler was a volatile person, after this unsuccessful test he burned all the prototypes but Ferdinand Porsche was a tenacious person so he never gave up working on Volkswagen. Until 1949 He solved all the problems and he made the Volkswagen stainless. In 1949 Volkswagens exported all over the world. Ferdinand Porsche died in 1951. He left the Wolfsburg Factory as a legacy to his son Ferry Porsche. In 60s Volkswagen became a symbol of peace. Millions of Volkswagens was sold all over the world.

WHAT IS THIS? IT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE A SUMMARY

GAMES ELEVATE HATE TO NEXT LEVEL

According to the news there are two wideo gamec which affect children’s life and their childhood.Game’s names are ethnic cleansing and shoot the blacks and concentration camp rat hunt.The second game is about black people and it affects children’s openion about black people.The game such sophisticated technology that’s geared spesifically toward spreading a message of HATE.
In my openion, children should play wideo games which are suitable for their age and games have to give a massage about peace and good/POSITIVE MESSAGES things...

GOOD JOB!

article / emre gökhan şahin

The article named “Violence in video games” written in 2009 by two psychologists whose names are Karen Dill and Craig Anderson. The article includes two studies that show familiar results. According to the studies, students who play more aggressive video games are becoming more aggressive. The second result is, students who spend the most total time playing video games obtain the lowest grades in college.
The studies have some points, but I do not totally agree. Children under 10 years old are influenced by violence in video games. I used to play this kind of games but I did not turn into a criminal, and start to behave aggressively. For the second study, I could not agree more. Spending much time on games, affects your grades.

GREAT JOB!

VIDEO GAMES EDA UZUN

Recently,researchers at Durham University have modified a video game and turned it into a fire drill simulator. Developers plan to use it to examine people's behaviour in a fire and to train people in good fire practise. They were interested in using game technology and used the simulation to see how people behaved in an actual fire situation and to train people in 'good practise' in a fire.By customising a video game, a finished representation of a building could be completed in just a few weeks without needing to learn or develop additional programming skills. I think,this study is useful and necessary.That's sounds good and interesting.

YOU ARE GOOD AT FINDING THE MAIN IDEAS, BUT YOU NEED TO PUT THEM IN YOUR OWN WORDS RATHER THAN COPY WORD FOR WORD FROM THE ARTICLE, PLEASE REWRITE IN YOUR OWN WORDS.
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Nowadays, Mark Davies is a respected psychologist from Nottingham , who study with two collegues about people who play online games. They do some researches and surveys in the U.K and these surveys show that this game is played by person who older than 19,because someone who older than 19 is not in a relationship and does not have other responsibilities.In conclusion, the study into online gaming is to continue and they want to find out effects of online games.


I think, this is a good study to improve our writing and reading skills. We should continue.

1/3, LETS WORK ON THIS ARTICLE TOGETHER DURING YOUR NEXT TUTORIAL WITH ME, PLEASE BRING IT WITH YOU.

MEHMET MANSUR UYAR
In 2000, a research was published by Craig Anderson and Karen Dill in order to inform parents that violent video games can increase children's aggressive behaviours.

I think this study is very beneficial.I really learned how to summerize an article.It should continue.

YOUR REACTION SHOULD BE TO THE ARTICLE, WHAT IS YOUR OPINION ABOUT THE ARTICLE? ALSO, WERE THERE ANY OTHER IMPORTANT IDEAS IN THE ARTICLE YOU COULD ADD TO YOUR SUMMARY?

SUMMARY mustafa TOSUN

This week in U.S government's national Institute of health Shawn Green and daphne Pitted made tests because of searching do medal of honour kind of games improve visual skills? They made two group and one group trained medal of honour. Other group trained classical game tetris. Ten days later who play medal of honour showed the improvement but tetris player showed no change.
In my opinion, this test doesn't necessary for me because I do not like playing computer games. I think games are vaste of time so they must not improve visual skills.

YOU GOT THE IDEAS, SEE IF YOU CAN IMPROVE THE GRAMMAR.

VIDEO GAMES AYŞE NUR DAL

There was a news about bad effect of online gaming in some WHAT COUNTRY? Europe countries in 2005.People are losing themselves in online gaming becasuse people cannot limited VERB TENSE themselves, online gaming can quickly become an unhealthy obsession and it makes people antisocial.
I really agree with this article because some people take their virtual live too seriously, they can not live without games this problem makes people unhappy and unhealthy.

GOOD JOB, YOU GOT MOST OF THE Ws, NOW CAN YOU CORRECT SOME MINOR GRAMMAR ERRORS?

To be an entrepreneur/ E.Gökhan şahin

To be an entrepreneur is very difficult in today’s world because of volatile economy. After having a sufficient start-up capital, we must try to create new products despite risk. We know a handful of examples of entrepreneurial people who have become very successful in volatile business climate. They are really risk-taking, and independent thinking people. It requires tenacity even if you fail in your first business job. Also, shareholders who do not like ploys besides being innovative are needed to work with.

Nowadays, we are suffering from economic crisis. This, start-up a volatile economy, which is hard to success. Some important entrepreneurs think that, we should not think with cynicism, because the compelling market will teach us to work with tenacity in our lives. According to to this, we can use crisis as an opportunity for the future. We all know that, being a successful person means to venture something that makes you the winner of your life.

İf you like basketball, when you think about nba, probably first name that you remember must be jordan. When you look history of nba, you can see just a HANDFUL of player who is such a good player. Actually this is a VOLATİLE thing becasue everyone can love different player. Even everybody think being basketball player is a doddle job, it is so COMPELLİNG. You have to take VENTURES. And you must be TENACİOUS. There are lots of player who ULTERIOR MOTİVE to play basketball, if you have just start to watch nba you have to attend theese player. You can easily realised them.

Nowadays, lots of people lost their job due to volatile economy. It is a really diffucult job to be succesful entrepreneur in this economy but there is some ways to achieve it. Firstly, you must have business venture and be innovative. When you innovate new product, you can sell it high prices because it is your own project. If you are tenacious person you will reach your goal because despite economic crisis you never give up. In addition when you work in conjection with partner who has been competant in business life, you will make a profit. If somebody receives legacy, he has to invest correctly for being rich man.

Recently, many people speculates that the financial crisis blasted all the world.Some big companies such as Lehhman brothers demonstrated their bankrupts.Experts think that deliquent is system.Nowadays the U.S government start to lend money to some big companies in order to change the situation.In all fairness , next years will be disparate for all humanity.

SUCCESS FOR MANAGERS IN BUSINESS LIFE-----EDA UZUN

If you want to be a successful manager,firstly you must be entrepreneur. That means you have a new idea or different idea,take a risk and work hard to make it work. Also an entrepreneur person has capability to identify an opportunity for creation or innovation and ability to turn it into a really. The key to entrepreneurial success is tenacity in today's volatile market. New products and services must affect to end-users. There are just a handful of entrepreneurs who has certain strategies. For instance, in Turkey, Sakıp Sabancı's strategy of entering the global economy through joint ventures with major multinationals should help insulate the company from volatility. Also,when you start-up capital, you can gain shareholders and you can share your opinions and money with them so you will grow together successfully. Thanks to all of these ways, you accomplish for being favorable manager in business life.

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Last year I went a job interview.When I went there there were a handful of people who were waiting.We could not find a job because of volatile economy.Boss seemed tenacity man but he was a man who had fathers legacy and he was really stupied man because he did not know so many thing about his job.In my opinion he had ulterior motive for candidate.Actually I did not see compelling event there.Business venture asked me some questions.In conjunction with I asked them what I wanted to know.One of candidate had ploy strategy which was really successful.Everywhere had cynsicism like this job interview.

ENTREPRENEUR

In todays volatile business life being a entrepreneur is very hard.If you want to be a entrepreneur you must gain with business ventures.You must be a compelling person to affect other businessmen or customers and you must have say to make people what you say.Also you must be clever person because a clever marketing ploy will change everything your life.You must opem the eyes for four because business life is full of cynicism.All in all a being a good entrpreneur in conjunction with intelligence and tenacity.If you have these features you will recieve a huge legacy to your children